Triple H
Aggression Superstar
The King Of Kings
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Post by Triple H on Sept 5, 2008 20:09:07 GMT -5
*the fans are quiet as it has been a boring night at RWF and they were about to leave when all of a sudden Triple H's Music blasted through the arena and a dark figure appeared at the ramp with something in his hand* .:King:. could it be Triple H?!?!?!?!?!
.:Cole:. It looks as if it is him but why now why here at the RWF?
.:King:. I'd say we are about to find out here he comes down the ramp now*the fans are eager to see that its triple h and when they do the fans are screaming as he looks to his left and right and he smiles as he walks and slaps some fans hands and walks up the steel steps and walks along the apron he opens the bottle and drinks some water leans back and spurts it out as he lifts up the 2nd rope and gets in the ring and puts the microphone up to his face and begins to speak*.:The Game Triple H:. i bet you all are wondering why i the game is in the RWF well you see in WWE they weren't offering much to me so i had my eyes set on this federation and now that im here we can pick up the business and i can win some titles and kick some ass but first i have one question *clears his throat**he leans down and begins to say* Are you ready!?!?! i said are you ready?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!
*fans shout louder and louder as he laughs and his music continues as he walks over to the ropes pulls the 2nd rope up and gets on the apron and hops off as he walks up the steps and up the ramp backstage as the show goes off air*
END!!!!!!!![/center] what ya think
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Ville Valo
Junior Member
August 2008 EFotM
I'm a dickhead, so don't talk to me!
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Post by Ville Valo on Sept 10, 2008 3:19:14 GMT -5
not bad. i like the way you structure it. but its a little short. try work on that. 6.5/10
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Red Dragon
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You Wish You Can Be Me!
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Post by Red Dragon on Sept 11, 2008 18:45:13 GMT -5
Awesome dude.. but ya could make it a little bit longer..
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Post by Randy Orton on Sept 11, 2008 19:59:08 GMT -5
try this. King: well that was a short for the King triple H. Michael Cole:yeah but wait.....what the hell....Randy Orton?! King:i think he has some unfinshed business from last week. ~i hear voices~ starts to play and soon after Randy Orton comes out he walks down the ramp slowly.he then speeds up and goes under the bottom ropes. He then grabs a mic from lilain. Randy Orton:as you all saw....Triple H had nothing but a bunch of crap to say... The crowd starts to boo. King well i see that the Fans arent takeing that so slightly Cole. Michael Cole:i see. Randy Orton:i dont care....what you people think of me..I know what i am.i am the Legend Killer Randy.......ORTON!!!!and if you people cant accept that...then you people dont deserve my attenion. and im leaveing the ring. ~i hear voices~ starts and Randy gets out the ring.he then walks up the ramp and disspear behind the curtain. {end} something like that
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Ville Valo
Junior Member
August 2008 EFotM
I'm a dickhead, so don't talk to me!
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Post by Ville Valo on Sept 12, 2008 23:18:44 GMT -5
well randy... thats a bit short imo... but hey... im just tony. who cares... even though i am writing some matches this week LOL...
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Red Dragon
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You Wish You Can Be Me!
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Post by Red Dragon on Sept 14, 2008 13:58:31 GMT -5
LMAO!!
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