Feedback for PitBull's match RP

[Redman]

The scene comes and shows PitBull in the gym working out for his debut. PitBull is working with the punching bag. The punching bag is swinging back a forth and PitBull is not even hitting it as hard ad he can. PitBull hits it a few more times then turns to the camera.


~PitBull~
Hey guys whats up


~Camera Guy~
not alot just here for your promo for your match


~PitBull~
oh yeah well right now im training for the match


PitBull heads over to the treadmill and starts off running slow


~PitBull~
Well as you know im a big guy and compared to me The Rock looks like a midget andto be as big as am i can run fast to be a big man


PitBull turns the treadmills speed as high as it can go and keeps running with it for a few minuets then turns it back down


~PitBull~
Now how many people do you know can do that? Well any ways over here now boys


PitBull walks over to the bench and puts 750 pounds on the bar and gets under the bar

~PittBull~
can three of you guys spot me?


Three guys walk over and grab the bar


~PitBull~
i don't need any help this is light compared to what i usally do


PitBull starts to bench the weight on the bar


~PitBull~
another reason i know The Rock has no chance is look at my arms the are huge and once i lock in the "Lock Jaw" he is done,over,Finished


PitBull racks the bar after 25 reps and puts 900 pounds on it


~PitBull~
my normal max is... im not sure because iv never hit my max but trust me it is alot the most iv gotten to is 1250 i think maybe more and i was having a little trouble with it. so y'all hold on and let me do this real quick.


PitBull lifts the bar and does 25 quick reps then racks the bar


~PitBull~
now thats what im talking about yall can get out of here because i got to get back to my work out bye

[Red Dragon]

Lmao.. awsome.. 8/10 ;)

[Aolina Sanchez||Glam Rock Diva]

8/10
it's pretty solid
Could use a bit more body to it
Needs some more description
But it's a pretty good foundation

[Ville Valo]

not bad mate. ive seen you do better but thats pretty good as always.

8.5/10

[Cody Lawrence]

Yea, it need's a little more length, but it was good. And damn, Pitbull is strong! He can pick up about 1 and a half Big shows

6/10